This is my individual rough cut to our group film, Chasing Shadows. In this i have built the video using cuts and colour graded. We will compare all of our individual rough cuts to make the best possible final outcome.
B3 Edited so that the story flows and maintains continuity, the locations work well together seamlessly. However at 1:17 I do not think you have enough footage to use this as your title sequence (you also need to trim down the detective reading - it drags). To improve - What is it that making him run - any ECU's on his face to show shock to justify this? If he is killed what happened to the rest of film - who finds out what he discovered? - It is essential you get more footage ASAP so your options are: - Plan you Title Slates asap to extend you opening - I recommend you use the 'Investigation boards' as your title slide concept. - There needs to be a revelation of the link here he has discovered for the Enigma code or show how he has passed on what he discovered to someone else.
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ReplyDeleteEdited so that the story flows and maintains continuity, the locations work well together seamlessly. However at 1:17 I do not think you have enough footage to use this as your title sequence (you also need to trim down the detective reading - it drags).
To improve
- What is it that making him run - any ECU's on his face to show shock to justify this? If he is killed what happened to the rest of film - who finds out what he discovered?
- It is essential you get more footage ASAP so your options are:
- Plan you Title Slates asap to extend you opening - I recommend you use the 'Investigation boards' as your title slide concept.
- There needs to be a revelation of the link here he has discovered for the Enigma code or show how he has passed on what he discovered to someone else.